Review for Conversation
Conversation
(#) babaca 2007-01-17 06:45:24 PM
Bittersweet, but yes, like the other reviewer, your spelling needs a bit of work. Gossip and not gossup. You may want to find a beta reader for you (or make sure you have a decent spell-check program. There are nice ideas in this but a bit of tightening up makes it easier for the reader to understand what's happening. But I did like it.
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