(#) BFCIV 2007-01-22
Finished Ch. 2 and I'm enjoying the character development. Vort is a pimp! LOL. Just kidding. Anyway, you manage to provide an interesting look into the way Vort perceives his interactions with women. I love it. Keep it up man.
Author's response
Oh yay I am so glad you are enjoying. I think I need to work on the html and formatting issues but I have never done this before so please, begs hang in there :D