Review for Family Issue
My only complain, is that the accents during direct-speech are over-done. Yes, people may actually speak that way, but it gets a bit tidious to have to deciffer words all the time... a middle-ground would've been preferble (still "military", but more understandable).
I'm really looking forward to Harry finding out he's bounded... to him understanding the "dreams" were real -- and discovering he's going to be a father.
I also hope Bellatrix get away, and that Harry manages to take care of her somehow. I also hope that Bella explains to Marietta how Harry didn't know he'd been shagging her (Bella) and was having a baby; and that the three of them somehow manage to make a stable relationship.
I would of course love if Marietta also ended-up pregnant before long.
Finally, I'm very much looking forward to Harry explaining to Moody, Dumbledore and his friends; how he managed to knock-up Bellatrix.
Keep up the good work.
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