Review for A Promise to Keep

A Promise to Keep

(#) Entilzah 2007-02-15 06:28:03 AM

In general, a good chapter with an excellent plot twist. The "acid trip" did seem a little disjointed and hard to follow, but from what I have heard, bad trips are like that!

You did a good job of leaving this reader with a "WTF is going on?"

Ero Sennin following the team makes perfect sense. Tsunade is a bit of a stretch given her position and sense of responsibility. But I can see it go either way!

All in all, another fine chapter!

Author's response

The "trip" was hard to write seeing as I've never had a psycotic episode and didn't know really how to approach it. ;) But I gave it my best.

Thanks for the feedback on the rest! I really appreciate it!

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