Review for A Promise to Keep
You did a good job of leaving this reader with a "WTF is going on?"
Ero Sennin following the team makes perfect sense. Tsunade is a bit of a stretch given her position and sense of responsibility. But I can see it go either way!
All in all, another fine chapter!
Thanks for the feedback on the rest! I really appreciate it!
After Harry and Ron die, Hermione must learn to live without them. Hermione, Luna, Ginny. Gen.
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