Review for When Your Heart Stops Beating

When Your Heart Stops Beating

(#) ThePatient 2007-02-15 08:24:13 AM

I've got to say i prefered the other two chapters although the ending was really good but i dont think the beginning was particularly as good as you others! It was still a excellant chapter though and please carry on!

Author's response

Yeah, I'd have to say I agree with you! This was a tough one. I'm going to start working on the next chapter very soon =)

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