Review for Sins

Sins

(#) JesusKetchum31 2006-05-19 08:36:22 PM

I think your workup of Sloth is a little weak, but the others are just great. Very insightful, very in-character. Pride and Envy in particular. Good job!

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 632433
  • Stories: 40431

Recent Stories