(#) jiggy 2007-02-23
i just read the beginning but it is a great story. you have a wide variety of vocabulary. this sounds like it is really going somewhere. well ill keep reading... plus love the detail!
Author's response
Wow! Thank you very, very much for reviewing and for the compliments! No joke- the thesaurus is my BFF. I'm such an English dork, lol. Glad to keep you reading!