Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) BenRG 2006-05-20 08:20:27 AM

Well! It should be interesting to see what Molly and Ginny do now! Ginny could turn at any time, although seeing that it was one of Tom's followers dropping poison in her ears may confuse her even more and prevent a quick decision.

As for Penny... well, the future is bleak. The new Minister is not renowned for his tolerance for Voldemort's followers. The child, of course, will be taken away from her at birth.

This is a very original story. The whole H/S genre is generally quite weak on the ground and the way you have chosen to pursue it is very interesting. Your characterisations are unusual too, showing a desire to see the dark sides of the familliar personalities.

I will be looking out for more.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

Author's response

Let me know what I need to do to make 10/10! Next chapter will cover the disposition of Penny. I am glad you enjoy the originality of my efforts.

Jim

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