Review for Family Issue

Family Issue

(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-02-24 02:03:31 PM

Lol, I think my favorite part is the back and forth conversation between Harry and Bellatrix. I do not know why but I feel that it is the best part of this chapter, not the planning for Bella's rescue part. Anyway, this is both a nice setup for the bext part and still adds to Harry and Bella's relationship. Good job!

Author's response

Thank you, as always for reading and taking the time to review. I've always liked good dialogue in a story; I can forgive all kinds of plot inconsistencies if the dialogue is engaging. Well, that and spelling, if the author won’t even bother to run a spell-check on the story why should I bother to read it? (I do forgive the occasional typo, but I have a five typo limit per story.)

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