Review for Harry Potter and the Quest for Pieces
Harry Potter and the Quest for Pieces
(#) AnnF 2007-02-28 09:49:19 PM
Really like this beginning, and hope you'll stay PG-13. Plot is wonderful.
typos at the beginning and end of this bit:
"waste, stroking the small of her back with his thumb. The slight pressure that he used with it elicited a moan of agreement that the slight menstruation"
typos at the beginning and end of this bit:
"waste, stroking the small of her back with his thumb. The slight pressure that he used with it elicited a moan of agreement that the slight menstruation"
Author's response
Thanks for the review. I will most definitely not stay PG13, however it will not be nearly as smutty as my other fic. I hope that you continue to read and enjoy.
Geovanni Luciano
Geovanni Luciano
Filter
You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0
Featured Story
-
Crayon Hearts and Trembling Hands (highschool Frerard)
by StormVandal (PG-13)He flung himself facedown onto his bed. Stupid Ray. Stupid Mikey. Stupid Frankie... No, Frankie wasn...
Site Stats
- Authors: 198239
- Stories: 39140
Recent Stories
-
Poem Therapy and Such
by GettingHighOnCyanide (G)A collection of shitty poems I write. More for therapeutic purposes than anything, but feel free to ...
In: Poetry
-
Vote!
by atomickilljoy (G)I AM going to delete this one, as soon as I come to a conclusion. I need your help.
In: Drama
-
The other side
by Barricade_Girl (PG)Arianne and Eponine are invited to the Les Amis's party after Ariane got together with Courfeyrac. W...
In: Romance
-
The Zones
by CupcakeFairy (PG-13)What happence when Madnetic Meace meets the Danger gang. Wiill thhey trust her. Will secrets be revi...
-
The Chemicals Will Always Bring You Home
by MCRmy_Frankie (G)Castiel, a long term psychiatric patient meets a boy, a friend, maybe something more, who changes hi...
In: Supernatural