Review for Harry Potter and the Quest for Pieces

Harry Potter and the Quest for Pieces

(#) AnnF 2007-02-28 09:49:19 PM

Really like this beginning, and hope you'll stay PG-13. Plot is wonderful.

typos at the beginning and end of this bit:
"waste, stroking the small of her back with his thumb. The slight pressure that he used with it elicited a moan of agreement that the slight menstruation"

Author's response

Thanks for the review. I will most definitely not stay PG13, however it will not be nearly as smutty as my other fic. I hope that you continue to read and enjoy.

Geovanni Luciano

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