(#) AnnF 2007-02-28
Really like this beginning, and hope you'll stay PG-13. Plot is wonderful.
typos at the beginning and end of this bit:
"waste, stroking the small of her back with his thumb. The slight pressure that he used with it elicited a moan of agreement that the slight menstruation"
Thanks for the review. I will most definitely not stay PG13, however it will not be nearly as smutty as my other fic. I hope that you continue to read and enjoy.