Review for Family Issue

Family Issue

(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-03-01 05:13:52 PM

So now Harry has an army at his command? Nice! Glad Marietta will still be around. I'm not too sure about the first part of this chapter with the 'conversation' with Bellatrix but as it doesn't detract from the main story it's okay.

I have a few questions. Will at some point Harry's regular crowd (Weasleys, Hermione) meet the two women (three if you count the baby) in Harry's life sooner or later? Isn't anyone of the order or Harry's old crowd wondering where he is? Finally doesn't anyone notice that Harry no longer shows up at the Dursleys anymore?

Author's response

Thank you, as always for reading and reviewing. I'm trying to convey the maturation of the Harry and Bellatrix bond, hope it works. Harry and family will be meeting his classmates near the end of the summer.

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