Review for Harry's Heritage
Harry's Heritage
(#) karen 2007-03-04 05:13:46 PM
Short, and justice is very sweet. There are enough long and bloody revenge fics out there. This is so much more; not only have they doomed themselves, they have effected all future heirs. Kill a father for bloody revenge, his son merely inherits sooner.
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Thanks for the review!
You're right - in the long run, I do believe cheaters never prosper. The thing I hate is that sometimes the long run just seems to take too damn long! At some point, though, I want to have more fun with this story. You've given me an idea to help flesh it out, as well - it's all well and good to do a harem fic, but where's the conflict (on second thought, there's PLENTY of conflict in any harem! That's why the chinese symbol for trouble is two women under one roof!)
But a Keystone Kops thing could work out nicely, with various families trying to somehow take back control of the family, and getting in each other's way.
You're right - in the long run, I do believe cheaters never prosper. The thing I hate is that sometimes the long run just seems to take too damn long! At some point, though, I want to have more fun with this story. You've given me an idea to help flesh it out, as well - it's all well and good to do a harem fic, but where's the conflict (on second thought, there's PLENTY of conflict in any harem! That's why the chinese symbol for trouble is two women under one roof!)
But a Keystone Kops thing could work out nicely, with various families trying to somehow take back control of the family, and getting in each other's way.
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