Review for Toritsuki

Toritsuki

(#) lolly 2007-03-12 11:00:00 AM

this is a well-written story. It would be interesting if you added more to it. Like how does Pai deal with fighting the love of his life. Does anyone notice this new attraction? OR does pai remaing Pai: cold distant focused on the task at hand?

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