Review for Anatomy
(#) juniper137 2007-03-12 08:32:53 PM
struggles to form a coherent thought i really like the poem your friend wrote.
i thought that the vampire wearing an MCR shirt was way creepy.
screws up face
also, i've been thinking...is there a good force, like a light side to counteract the vampire-y darkness? because why would gee and frank have such a strong connection if supernatural forcers weren't at play? like the (really cool/touching) part when frank's memory of gerard naming his bones brought him actual physical comfort...or for that matter, the dreams that gerard mentioned earlier, the ones about frank's death, and the ones that helped spur him into action...were they like sent to him by some other force? or am i reading into this to much...or possibly reading into something that's not there...i do read a lot of fantasy/sci-fi, so maybe i'm just assuming there has to be a good to every bad. but yeah. those are just the ramblings of my mind right now.
thanks for another great chapter!
Thanks for your questions! I really appriciate you taking time to analyze my story, haha.
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