Review for Anatomy

Anatomy

(#) juniper137 2007-03-12 08:32:53 PM

jesus. that...it was...um, wow. this was like taking a portkey (hopefully you read harry potter...), you yanked us all over the place and i was all surprised to find myself at the end. hmm, i just reread that sentence and it doesn't make much sense...THAT is what you're writing does to me.
struggles to form a coherent thought i really like the poem your friend wrote.
i thought that the vampire wearing an MCR shirt was way creepy.
screws up face
also, i've been thinking...is there a good force, like a light side to counteract the vampire-y darkness? because why would gee and frank have such a strong connection if supernatural forcers weren't at play? like the (really cool/touching) part when frank's memory of gerard naming his bones brought him actual physical comfort...or for that matter, the dreams that gerard mentioned earlier, the ones about frank's death, and the ones that helped spur him into action...were they like sent to him by some other force? or am i reading into this to much...or possibly reading into something that's not there...i do read a lot of fantasy/sci-fi, so maybe i'm just assuming there has to be a good to every bad. but yeah. those are just the ramblings of my mind right now.
thanks for another great chapter!

Author's response

Oh jeez. Comment queen much? I totally love you right now. And to answer your very interesting and deep questions, yes, there is a spiritual force connecting Frank and Gerard. As you'll soon come to find out, Frank is a little more powerful than people believe him to be. And Frank and Gerard are bound now, so the connection and bond between them is stronger, as you could obviously tell, and Gerard is Frank's rock; his support, his encouragement, his life.
Thanks for your questions! I really appriciate you taking time to analyze my story, haha.

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