Review for Family Issue

Family Issue

(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-03-14 12:09:35 PM

Um, Bella ducking into the shower after Harry and Marie found her scars was so...so...HARRISH! Sorry, I don't know a better word for it. That is SO what Harry would do when he thinks there's something about himself that would turn people off to him. That was a nice touch! I'm guessing the next chapter is Harry and Marie comforting her. Good.

Anyway, good chapter as usual. Hope they do not run into too much trouble with the rest of the camp.

Author's response

As always, thank you for reading and reviewing. I think it's safe to say the next chapter will be touching and feeling and well, you know. There will also be more significant story developments - stay tuned . . .

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