Review for A litle problem
Good story. Hope there'll be some Girl Spy vs Girl Spy confrontation in your next update. Watch out for the hidden typos. Periods at the end of your sentences and spaces after a comma or when you start a new phrase. Other than that, keep up the good story idea.
After batteling the dementors at the end of his third year at Hogwart's, Harry notices himself going...
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Hello friends if you remember me you reALLY NEED TO READ THIS RIGHT NOW DO IT
I think you were right. I think you had a point there.
I promised you that I would always remember. Things like that, well they don't just fade away.
REWRITE IN PROGRESS In a world where nightmares have become reality, Jack is just trying to survive ...
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