Review for A litle problem
A litle problem
(#) gucci84 2007-03-15 04:55:26 AM
Aww. Julius always knows what to say eh? Ursula needs a good indian burn on her arm for saying those things to Delilah. You make me hate her and that rules. Although I'm too nice to her in my latest story...
Good story. Hope there'll be some Girl Spy vs Girl Spy confrontation in your next update. Watch out for the hidden typos. Periods at the end of your sentences and spaces after a comma or when you start a new phrase. Other than that, keep up the good story idea.
-Gucci84
Good story. Hope there'll be some Girl Spy vs Girl Spy confrontation in your next update. Watch out for the hidden typos. Periods at the end of your sentences and spaces after a comma or when you start a new phrase. Other than that, keep up the good story idea.
-Gucci84
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