lol thats very Archie...you got the character down really well...i can't really choose which one's my favorite, though...maybe you should do something like that for the other characters too? just a suggestion.
Author's response
Thanks! I'm really big on characterizing character's properly, so I'm really really really glad it the fic actually sounds like Archie. As for the others, I'm doing some brainstorming on the theme words of another set for Neil, but I'm not sure if I'll do everyone in the end. I did Archie first because he's the one I have the most ideas about concerning background and character, but we'll see :) It's nice to know that people want to see more, so thanks again!