Eh heh..a little inappropriate, but you rated it, it was my fault for not listening...Bah, it was good except in halfway when in Archie's dream they had...uh...yah.
Hey thanks, but I did warn you... twice (its rated NC-17 and has the X warning). And I know Archie's dream was a little well not for children. Though unfortunatly the WHOLE story was very easy to write. Oh well I gave fair warning.