No faith you say? My dear, you are very wrong! I thought it was really fantastic. Seriously. I was holding my breath through most of it (which I suppose is fitting considering all that happened). Anyway, you really make me understand Pete's hurt and anger and all that and not just be pissed at him for being a jerk.
Soooo... I can't wait for more!!! (Sorry for my sucky review, I'm just not in my groove or something today) Have a point for origionality and go write!