" felt like I was somehow marooned on a stagnant island, left to shrink in the distance as my peers sailed on to the next level of adulthood. " OK - WOW? That was amazing!
I loved this chapter Kyle, the food, the convo's, the kids, the sexiness....I'm so enjoying reading this, every single word, I lie not.
I love how each chapter is little cliffhanger that you dangle me over. Until your next chappie, I'm just gonna hang out here on this cliff top and wait to die....
I love pirate analogies and I felt that this story needed one. Now, I think you're being slightly dramatic. I won't let you die on my literary cliff. Bring some sandwiches, a couple of capri suns, and some sunblock and you'll be fine. Just don't jump or anything.