Review for My Open Door

My Open Door

(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-04 07:58:48 PM

I really liked this poem. It is so cool. One thing though is that the line 'You're my open door' didn't seem to fit with the rythm. Maybe 'You are my open door' would work. But you might have done that intentionaly.

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