Okay, you're screen name says it all: You ARE THE STORY MASTER! I mean, I'm not the most impressionable person, but I was, no AM impressed by your magestic writing skills! I mean, the plot was perfectly puzzled together, and I could literally feel the wave of emotions portrayed by each indivisual character. Not to mention that the characters' personality traits were perfectly in line of how the creator made them. So, sorry if I made an extremely long review, but I love this story, and you are going in my fav author's. So keep showing off you're great stories!
Magic144:)