I really like this story.
It sucks that people are accousing you of plagiarism. Actually, today someone emailed me and accoused me of doing plagiarism! Seriously, people should think before they confront someone.
Anywho, great job with this story, I can't wait to read more. :)
Author's response
Well, this story's over, but there will be other random crap in the future. Stay tuned after these messages.