Review for After

After

(#) sea0tter12 2007-04-08 08:00:37 PM

It was an interesting premise for what amounted to an epilogue for all the characters. I did come away wishing for more depth, and I think a beta reader would be very helpful for many of the punctuation problems I saw. Overall, though, not bad.

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