i like it, like I usually do with this story ^^
I think you did good with the POV, especially Brian I liked the last sentence "Now... where'd that bottle go?" That one lifted the mood a little ^^
Can't wait to read more - oh and please can we get some more convo between Toni and maybe Frank or Mikey, cause I know there is some but they could talk more..please? offers cookie and does bambi eyes
Laura
Author's response
Yer... don't panic!!! The next chapter is Mikey filled! I promise!
Takes cookie and sticks tongue out!
xx