Review for Fragile

Fragile

(#) Moonee 2006-06-06 01:55:48 PM

My dad just had to ask me why I was crying. That was...It was amazing. I love how you made Archie realize what a hero was. And I love how atlanta felt sad because he said he had no-one. (grabs a kleenex) kudos to you, that was the best coot story I've read so far. I only hope that I'll be able to write like that someday.

Your devoted fan,
Moonee

Author's response

I usually get near the verge of crying every time I read this myself, sorry if I got you embarassed D= And Archie needs to know what a hero he is, I just helped him realize it as he died ;) And poor Atlanta, I think she does like Archie the same way he likes her, but she just doesn't know how to show it. So finally realizing that you love someone and then them saying they have no one... it'd hurt me too. The best? I don't think so, I'm not that great with CotT fanfictions, but thank you for the compliment. Work hard and keep trying, listen to the comments, and you'll be outdoing my writing by leaps and bounds. And as a fan... wow... I think one of the one-shots will be for you soon, you've stuck through all my terrible writing thus far, and so thank you. ~Demenior

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