Oh, I loved how her defences are just being chipped away. I loved how you showed she was doing the complete opposite of everything she thinks she wants to.
And the most telling thing? She likes Andy enough to eat the vegan stuff!
It all just flows so well. Nothing seems contrived in this story. Great job. You have me admiration. With a cheeky wee point stuck to it x
Author's response
"And the most telling thing? She likes Andy enough to eat the vegan stuff!" Haha I swear vegan food isn't as bad as it must sound. Most of it is really good actually. But I do have to say that your review definitely made me smile tonight. :)