Review for Or leave a kiss within the cup

Or leave a kiss within the cup

(#) Poopoochan 2007-04-21 08:05:42 PM

OH MY GOD!
SO CREATIVE! I wondered about the significance of your title to the plotline (haha, Conrad was drinking out of the glass!) That idea is just SO original it makes me rethink the entire idea of accidental kisses entirely!

Anyways, I also REALLY liked how you conveyed the awkwardness in Yuuri's thoughts with the short and stutter-y sentences here: "It would be a good idea to pull back now. Or at least get his face off Conrad's. Yes."

I don't know, the ending, to me, seems a little bit unfinished. Is it meant to pave the way for a sequel or possibly another conyuu? winks

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