Hahahahahahhahahahahahahahaha. And HA!
Captain somersault = my new favourite inanimate object on Ficwad (replacing last weeks winner - Patrick's hat).
And you're 'slow' going right off the page made me laugh more than I would care to admit to in sane company (that, of course, doesn't include you)
Having recently witnessed the "dynamics" of a FOB concert, you're take on it was hilariously accurate :-0
Now go write some more, plot or no (and give me an excuse to overuse some more brackets in my reviews)xxxxxxxxxxx
Author's response
Your reviews are always so rewarding, lady! :)
Glad I could make the concert atmosphere believable. I can't remember the last time I was at one. And at a FOB concert? laughs hysterically In Austria? Nah... ;)