Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-04-27 04:47:38 AM

Oh that was so funny! I liked it! I gave you point!! My only issue is how you broke up a 2 syllable word into 3! wo-rk-ing? WTF is that? Didnt you read it outloud!!! =P If you can say it outloud in 3 syllables right now I'll send you a prize!!----xoxo

Author's response

lol...i give up nothing, can get past you, i'll fix it!!
thanx for the review and i took your advise and read and reread the dialog and the chapter but i guess i just missed it.

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