Review for Why Can't You See How Much I Love You?
Why Can't You See How Much I Love You?
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-04-27 10:37:14 AM
Hey! FINALLY ficwad let me freakin' review your story! Yessss! I LOVED IT. No, really. I. LOVED. IT. You wrote that scene really well. Oh! I have an idea for you. You don't have to use it, but here it is anyway. Okay, so you kinda infused the new beard Brendon's been sporting and stuff but how about his tattoo? (It is piano keys btw.) I dunno. If you worked it in somehow I'd be happy. But you don't have to. Just tryin' to get your mind thinkin' Oh, and good luck on your exams!
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Author's response
lmao, its been annoying me too! wow, thankyou, you think I wrote it well? woohoo! ooo, that is a good idea... I shall think about that... LMAO! oh, thanks! I'm gonna need it... xx
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