Review for you can keep my brother
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-04-30 11:07:59 AM
that's exactly what's missing, the emotional stuff!
i knew something isn't there but just couldn't put my finger on it, so i wasn't so pleased with it.
i'm going to rewrite it over the weekend and post it along with the next chapter.
thank you so very much!
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