Review for Up, Up, And Away
I've been trying to think up something to say in the spirit of constructive criticism, but, honestly, I can't. The tone, Serafina's thoughts, the setting, and everything you write just seems to blend so naturally. It's an effortless read, which is fantastic, in my book since I hate having to re-read things to try and decipher what the author was actually trying to say.
Really, all I have to say is that you did a fantastic job with this. I really enjoyed it!
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drew an octopus and made it target practice
What the fuck am I doing
Oneshots based around different flowers, or involving different flowers. Most will be quite short.
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