Hey!
Awsome one shot. Definitely a fav! Constructive crit, eh? Ummm, I guess the only thing would be some grammer/spelling- but I blame that one word processing programs ;P. And maybe a little more description. Although, I thought it was perfect the way it was. Awsome job! I'd love to see a sequel out there- if you feel like writing one. Amazing job once again- I just love that couple now! Though still a huge fan of J/T and A/A. Cheers!
~Tory;D