Review for By The Light Of Our Love

By The Light Of Our Love

(#) fruit_addict 2007-05-24 08:29:25 PM

nice! although one thing doesn't fit. the way her sword was positioned made no sense. the handle being at the bottom, well the sword would fall out and it wouldn't make it very easy to pull out of it's seath. If she was attacked it would delay her long enough to be killed. Just a little detail... finish more plz!

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