Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-26 12:39:05 PM

This was so funny! I loved the part about her pillow.(Not MY PILLOW!). I had tears in my eyes from laughing! Seriously- Great work!!! Its okay if you dont write X rated scenes or even R rated scenes. I like how you skipped over it, by making her conviently 'black out'. And I liked Ray saved the day... You know I didnt even notice he wasnt there when they were baking. waves apologetically to Ray now update!!----xoxo

Author's response

shakes head at you how could you forget ray, savior of the drunken four? your review made me smile! if i made someone cry with laughter my job on earth is done!

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 602730
  • Stories: 40299

Recent Stories