Review for you can keep my brother
you can keep my brother
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-26 12:39:05 PM
This was so funny! I loved the part about her pillow.(Not MY PILLOW!). I had tears in my eyes from laughing! Seriously- Great work!!! Its okay if you dont write X rated scenes or even R rated scenes. I like how you skipped over it, by making her conviently 'black out'. And I liked Ray saved the day... You know I didnt even notice he wasnt there when they were baking. waves apologetically to Ray now update!!----xoxo
Author's response
shakes head at you how could you forget ray, savior of the drunken four? your review made me smile! if i made someone cry with laughter my job on earth is done!
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