Review for Balance of Power
Balance of Power
(#) ElfGirl 2006-06-20 10:04:31 AM
I wanted to let you all know how much I am enjoying your story. You have an excellent grasp of pacing - instead of rushing ahead (like many of us readers would like) you take the time to build the story piece by peice. It's the details of the time passing and the way the charachters interact to build relationships that make this story shine. You have done a great job of creating original charachters who are interesting in their own right. To top it all off I would never have guessed that this is a collaborative effort - the voice of the story is solid and consistent.
Thank you for sharing this with the rest of us. I look forward to more!
Thank you for sharing this with the rest of us. I look forward to more!
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