Review for From That Moment You'll Be Out Of Place And Underdressed

From That Moment You'll Be Out Of Place And Underdressed

(#) sarh10323 2007-05-29 08:16:32 PM

Why oh why did you have to end the story so soon? I wuld have expanded their relationship more during the five month period. It wuld have made the story more fun to read no offense though. it's much better than the shit that i write.

Author's response

well I did do that for a reason, because I wanted the audience to be in a position where they dont know as much and then in the sequal...yes there will be a sequal

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