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Chapter 9

Blame, pain and chains

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2008/06/16 - Updated: 2008/06/16 - 951 words - Complete

Reviews

• Watching, Waiting

  (#) MCR_over 2008-06-16 11:47:48 PM

  damn. at least they are still alive thats good right????
  I love it

  Author's response

  Can't be a bad thing! lol! I have the next 2 chapters sketched out and all I can say is.....
  
  No, I'll let you find out when the time comes ;)

• Watching, Waiting

  (#) clutsy_93 2008-06-17 01:07:43 AM

  Gosh, love it!!!
  Can't wait for more.
  Loving it as always.
  
  
  Not MIKEY ):
  Or FRANK!!!
  Cries
  Update Soon please
  x.
  Samantha

• Watching, Waiting

  (#) GeeDeexx 2008-06-17 09:44:15 PM

  Okay, so I noticed you only got two reviews on this chapter, but you deserve a hell of a lot more. I just read your entire story so far and it's beautiful. Although, I was wondering, do we have a complete background drawn out for the killer? Was he just a guard before? Because, honestly, if that was all he was, I think you could twist it into someone more effective in the band's past.
  Still beautiful though.
  
  never stop writing.
  
  -d

  Author's response

  Wow! Thanks! :D
  There is a little more to the guard's past, some of which is in chapter 11 (posted last night).
  I'm getting some great reviews and it's really spurring me on try to make it good for everyone - I hope I don't let you down! :)

• Watching, Waiting

  (#) kitkatpwl 2008-06-18 03:48:00 PM

  Just catching up, but I wanted to say, this line is brilliant!!
  
  “I’d like to say, I’m just passing through, but it looks like I’m a permanent resident.”
  
  It killed me...I can just imagine Mikey saying something like that!! :)
  
  Cheers
  Kat

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