The aftermath of and explanation for the Breakup
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-06-20 05:18:37 PMHarry is realy the Head of three Houses, Black, Gryffindor, Potter.
Harry's name should be somthing like,
"Lord Harry James Potter-Black-Gryffindor"
I think Harry realy has more then three though. It would be nice if Harry used ALL the Titles he has.
I am glad to see Dobby in this story, most authers forget about him.
- I am disappointed in how you used Daphne, the revenge should be suitable to make up for it. If not the story went from a good one in my books, to one I would rather not read it again category. Please update soon and with some suitable retribution for your abuse of her.
- Well played my man!
Not only will harry tear apart the Shit of a father grangrass, he'll probably leave splinters behind when the Wizangamot Tries to stop him.
Oh and dumbles...maybe he'll be renamed mumbles!
As you can tell I've been HIGHLY anticipating this a d given how Daphne's been treated I have the feeling this old decrepit count will have only one number...
God I live this story!
- very interesting twist, I might be one of the only people that thought you were right for having that happen to Daph, it was fluffy, too fluffy, that took it from a fairy tale; and made it a bit more real, looking forward to the next update
- Loved the meeting between Hermione's parents and Justin. Personally I think the Grangers might be more comfortable with Hermione with a muggle-born because at least there is the possibilty of her not totally cutting off her parents world. to be honest, i think she would have more in common with a muggle-born than a pureblood like Ron. Loved the line about if Justin is anything like Ron then Mr. Granger would force her to marry Harry. I thought it was funny. The part about Daphne being abused by that fat, nasty count and then beaten for trying to run away was depressing and yucky and ruined the light hearted mood of the first part of the chapter but it will not turn me away from the story. Please let's not have a repeat peformance of that. Can't wait for Harry to kick serious butt, and put a whole lot of people in their place. Also are you going to tell us how Remus betrayed Harry? Keep up the great work.
(#) slayersfan01 2008-06-20 07:59:27 PMOh god, that was awful to the ninth degree. Daphne's father is a fucking asshole that should be assraped by the Count so he can see how it is like to be used like a thing. Seriously, the guy needs to die and to suffer at the hands of the most dangerous people of all, a group of very protective and prone to violence mothers (having Harry and company kill him will be good too). Mrs. Greengrass needs to have her Justice as well. Please include her in the violence in the next chapter as the one who cuts off his manhood or something before Harry kills him.
That was one hell of a cliffhanger. I hate cliffhangers. Please, update soon, very soon.
Please, no more making Harry's love interests be raped. Acts of Betrayal was Ugh (good read but squimish about it specially since Ron was able to get in that one last rape), this is a hell of a lot worse since noone was around to save Daphne. I really fear seeing the next time you come up with another situation where Harry's love interests gets raped. I'll probably still read it but will have to puke up whatever I last ate afterwards. I hate throwing up.