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Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) XxMy_Sweet_RevengexX 2008-06-21
Oh my god! That was so sad. Poor Ryan. I started crying when I read this.
Another great chapter. I loved it!
+Alice+Author's response
awwww! Don't cry! You'll make me cry too!!
Whips out four boxes of Kleenex and suprises you with a huge hugBet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-21
:O
This is going to be one heck of a long review, mind you. So you are warned.
First off--
"Now bruised perse and swollen frozen in a silent scream."
I loved this quote. So much. It was amazing.
Oh, and this one, too:
"The red heart that once read 'Brendon' in it, now blue and the words, unintelligible."
My two favorite quotes from this chapter. They were lovely and sick and incredible. I loved them. :]
Now, is it weird, that I say I felt more sad for Ryan than I did for Brendon? Even though Brendon was the one getting killed?
It was like, he was finally realizing the truth. That Brendon didn't really love him and that Ryan was actually nothing to him. And as much as I wanted Ryan to realize that in previous chapters, during this chapter, I still sort of wanted him to remain ingnorant, because I didn't want him to feel the pain of how hurtful the truth really was.
But, I also felt bad for Brendon. Having him find out that Ryan killed his love, must've been heartbreaking. But, it was heartbreaking for Ryan as well, to discover what Brendon really felt for Ryan.
And how Ryan just kept injuring Brendon was awful and saddening. This chapter was so intense and I truly applaud you. You have gone where no author has gone before. This story was original to the full extent.
I assure you I have never read anything like this.
It had love, betrayal, death, murder, lust, humor, revenge, rejection, insanity, and much, much more.
And I'm always a sucker for great endings. And at the end of this chapter, it was amazing. I can't describe it.
Update soon? (Will there be another chapter?)
Author's response
Your reviews are total inspiration to me.
I can never wait for you to write something because you always describe things to me in such detail.
AND I can understand what you write (and that's saying a lot)
Right now I feel bad that I can't express how greatful I am because too many things are going though my mind right now, but I assure you, I totally am!
And yes, there will be another chapter. Don't get too happy though because I believe this story is reaching its end :(
(i know right)
But I'm pretty sure there's a whole lot more stories and shit where that comes from!
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(#) Lizzard 2008-06-21
I never know what to say to you in reviews, except tha your story is so sick, and twisted, and wonderful. It's a piece of genius, and I just... I always finish a chapter all wide-eyed and gaping. You ROOOCK!Author's response
lol.
That's okay, I NEVER know what to say in reviews.
Thnx though. xDBet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) linerlover 2008-06-22
ohh... shit?
this story is amazing. really really so. and its like a window to the inside of his mind...
this story is sick, twisted and utterly brilliant. i applaud you. applauds haha.
oh, and as a reference, look up the user 'smooshy' on this site. she is possibly one of the most twisted authors i have read. and i must say, you are preeety damn close.
more soon? =]Author's response
Yay!! I wrote something "brilliant"!
bows several times
lol, conceited moment.
I believe I've started reading something from that author.
"Carnivore" I think the title was.
Fucking sick. it was.
I luvved it!!!
And that I'm pretty close to them is really big because this is my first story, so thanks.Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) dropthedaggerlaura 2011-08-11
What the fuck? Sorry but not in a bad way it's just I read this at midnight, in a dark tomb, alone, surrounded by dead strangers... Ooooh wont be sleeping tonight (or morning)... Anyway Hauntingly beautiful mate. shuddersBet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) snake56tongue 2012-01-02
I cannot express how much I love this.
It's so .... Fucked up ..... And, the way you describe Ryans feelings, it's like ..... It's every thing you've wanted to do but never acted on.
It's so twisted, and gruesome, and naked, and horrifying, and wrong ..... But that is what makes it amazing :)
Also, I was gonna review on another earlier chapter, but thought I would read to the end (or near the end) before I do, and I love how you write this story, like every thought that passes through his head.
Well done, you did such a fucking good job :)
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