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Rip What You Sew
6 reviews"Ripping What You Sew" and "Reaping What You Sow" are two VERY different things.
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Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) emovampire 2008-06-23
Most amazing end...ever.!!!!!!
wow you are amazing!
beautifully written!!!!
wow......
i look forward to future fan fictions.
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(#) Lizzard 2008-06-23
Holy fucking cow. Again, you've left me speechless, and I can't think of any better way to end this.Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) linerlover 2008-06-23
this is possibly one of the best endings ive ever read. and im not exaggerating.
please write other stories-- id love to read whatever you throw at us, frankly.
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(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-23
Alright. Before I go ranting on how incredible this last chapter was, it's quote time!
"Every hair curled, every cheek blushed, every tooth bright. Every bone in place, every contusion hidden, every wound sealed."
I thought that was amazing. :]
As well as:
"Bathed and dressed in a gown that would make Cinderella rage with envy, the not so blushing bride sat with her head upon her dapper groom's shoulder, just like old times."
and:
"But with their bands squeezing the decaying and distended flesh of their ring fingers, they lay eternally in one another's hold in a bed they call their own."
Those were beautiful quotes and I absolutely adore how you place words together to form lovely and twisted metaphors.
My mouth was totally agape reading this final (tear) chapter. I loved all of this and this story was truly amazing and far more adjectives that will never describle how incredible this actually was.
This chapter was so sad, so very, very sad and I wish I could explain my thoughts, but right now, I am too stunned by the awesome-ness of this to even think.
And the ending? It made me speechless [which is really hard to do, considering I always have something to say]
I mean, this story was dark, twisted, lovely, beautiful, sick, insane, creative, and so many more words. :]
You are a fantastic writer and I surely hope you write more soon. I'm sure, whatever you write, it'll be just as great. If not, even better.
Keep writing, love.
Because I will surely be reading.
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(#) medicatedlives 2008-06-23
Wow. That was sick. Sick, but awesome.
I'm just a little confused though- who was the voice with the x by it? Was that his crazy alterego?
And by the way, if you post any more stories, I will definitely read them. =)Author's response
The x was some crazy little voice in te back of his head. It was kinda like hvaing the devil and angel on each shoulder, only thing there's no angel, and it's all in his head.Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) SinsNotTragedies95 2008-09-28
oh. my fucking jesus. that, was, AWESOME!!!!
how can you even come up with that??? PURE GENIUS!!!!!! really really awesome, perfectly written. uber fantastic. i hope you write more stories because i love your writing!!!
this last chapter was so sad but i frickin loved it!! it was stunning. plz write more stories!!!
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