Categories > Original > Erotica
Are you sure?
4 ReviewsPatrick and Cael are on the laptops. Patrick suggests they wrestle.. and well..things happen.
Reviews
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Are you sure?
(#) taliee 2008-06-24 09:08:31 PM
I'm not going to lie, I actually
really liked this. It was really
sweet.
You did good!
Author's response
Thank you so much.
I really do appreciate it a lot.
Thanks for the review. (: -
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(#) magita 2008-06-28 02:30:28 AM
I was skeptical at first as to whether it would be any good, then you completely shattered my expectations. Everyone who has ever written an R rated story is lucky that i read yours first, I will search for the rest of my days for an R rated story to match this quality. Thankyou for being alive.Author's response
This is really sweet. I enjoyed reading your review, just as much as you did my story. Its always really nice to have someone like you tell me these things. Thank you so much for reviewing :DD -
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(#) legacyforgotten 2008-06-29 08:51:33 PM
i actually fell in love with this. it was really good and passed my expectations. it could have been longer, however looking back it was the perfect length for the sweet ending. great job ^_^Author's response
Why thank you, I appreciate the review, and your time. I really do, thank you so much :DD