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Remembering Sunday
6 ReviewsFor Patrick, there is finally peace // one shot
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Remembering Sunday
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-26 02:34:42 PM
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Before I go raving on this one-shot, allow me to comment on one particular quote that I absolutely adored--
"His heart, was so close to being offered to his true love, dropped into the pit of his stomach with nothing short of a heavy thud."
I don't know what it was about this sentence that had captured my attention, but it was lovely. Perhaps it was the string of adjectives linking together in perfection. Or maybe I thought it was a good metaphor. Whatever it was, I thought it was amazing.
Anyway, I loved this.
It was so sad. You, my dear, are a wonderful writer and I love your words. :]
Favoriting.
(I would rate, but I don't have any more rating points.)
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Remembering Sunday
(#) xPrettyInPunkx 2009-07-03 08:00:40 AM
Awh it was sweet, I really enjoyed it =) -
Remembering Sunday
(#) Xnataliex 2009-07-03 12:50:40 PM
This is as bittersweet as it gets. Amazing song, amazing story. Getting a one-shot right isn't easy; you struck gold here :-). Thank you for this great addition to fall out boy fanfiction. -
Remembering Sunday
(#) Chicago-Kid 2009-07-03 04:28:35 PM
That's such a good song/story.
Loved it. and the oceans part too -
Remembering Sunday
(#) chocolatechortle22 2009-07-07 07:47:38 PM
that kinda makes me wanna cry but its so good i like itAuthor's response
aw thanks! that's exactly the emotional response i was going for! thanks for the review!