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Split Mirror

Man is at it's height of power, but creatures of magic are nearing extinction.

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG - Genres: Fantasy - Characters:  - Published: 2008/06/26 - Updated: 2008/06/26 - 1197 words - Complete

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• Split Mirror

  (#) Thelionwaits 2008-06-26 08:41:03 PM

  Very intersting, and exciting, premise. The pantheons have been broughttogether in a totally new way. Kudos for that.
  You left the reader hanging, figuring there would be more, I hope you intend to pursue your story further, there is a lot of potential.
  My only criticism - there are a few grammatical errors (minor punctuation and word usage, nothing major) you might want to look into for your future endeavors. Otherwise a very interesting read.

  Author's response

  Thank you for your praise and thank you even more for your criticism. I plan to add more but the story splits three different ways (one to each dimension the female shadow mentioned) and I plan to write each in a different section to try not to completely confuse the reader. I'm sorry I did not mention this in some sort of end note.

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