Oh god Mikey!!!
I'm loving the possibilities of this story! It's great already I can't wait to see what you do!!
The whole creature slashing at his brain lines were BRILLIANT!! Great great wording!
I really like the idea for this story. I love how this is written. Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Heh... I've not read anything like this before, but it's genius! Mikey, an alcoholic? I can't wait to see how it turns out, and I'll be rating:)
i like that the word genius has been tossed around more than once
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