After being shipwrecked, the seven heroes find themselves in a very dangerous situation. Will they be able to see through the traps to the truth and escape? (JxT; AxA)
(#) BlackAngelChick 2008-07-10 06:19:17 PMI love the storyline, it's very original, but I think the story goes on for a bit too long. Don't get me wrong, I love it, but it's just so long! Oh, and also try substituting full stops with commas. It makes the story seem more professional.