Hermione cleans up some Potter family business.
(#) allos 2008-07-07 04:50:35 PM
Quite interesting, I'm not sure I've read one like it. Please Continue.
(#) dougal74 2008-07-07 04:52:16 PM
A really good start, I hope I don't have to wait to long for your next chapter.
Keep up the good work.
I liked this story.
It it very original.
I can't wait to find out what happens next.
(#) xandrian 2008-07-07 05:14:26 PM
I enjoy it so far. It's an interesting start. I'm curious to see where you take it.
seems unfinished to me..more like the start of a story rather than a one shot
(#) biged78 2008-07-07 05:52:13 PM
(#) pi3142 2008-07-07 06:10:18 PM
Argh...this is not a one shot...
(#) dennisud 2008-07-07 07:29:03 PM
Well you sure opened up a can if worms But a good sort.
I can't wait to see how the various families got together. I also have a similar story though starting right after DH (Yeah I'll forget the epilogue).
(#) bluehorse 2008-07-07 08:19:30 PM
You have my attention.
(#) jump_jives 2008-07-07 08:55:37 PM
This is a very nice little story, but I have to agree that this is begging to be a longer story. I must say that using a shortage of males (apparently from the war) as a reason for polygamy seems a more realistic reason for a Harry/many story than most.
While a Harry/many story might have people expecting a fair amount of smut, its not really necessary story. I think this has been set up in such a way that the really interesting part of the story is the 'through the looking glass' quality of Rebecca and Rose learning about a new world.
If necessary I would offer to help you by acting as a sounding board for ideas, or possibly even a beta depending upon your needs.
Having said all of that, I can't help but mention that I am looking forward to the next chapter of Motorcycle.