Harry's future self comes back to help Harry before his 5th year.
(#) thekev 2008-07-08 01:41:55 PM
great start i look forward to more
(#) craigery 2008-07-08 03:03:04 PM
Sirius animgus form is a black dog looking like a grim, not a wolf.
(#) Brian64 2008-07-08 03:30:56 PM
Other than Sirius' form being a grim-like dog instead of a wolf, I think the story has potential. I'm always up for a good Ron-bashing or redo fic! :D
Good start! I do hope it not Harry/Ginny
(#) nyef 2008-07-08 06:38:52 PM
Thus far, I see a competently-executed redo story with a number of cliche elements and two or three original ones. I found myself wishing that the rating system offered a "+1 Cliche" option, and am looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
(#) Wolfric 2008-07-08 06:49:38 PM
Well this seems to have possibilities. I would like to see where you are headed. Thanks for writing. W.
(#) jabarber69 2008-07-08 07:19:43 PM
Oh Yes! Please continue!
(#) Dgburns 2008-07-09 01:08:34 AM
Briliant start! Nasty cliffy, but it's ok. Now just keep at it. I know some people will moan about updates and I am sorely tempted, but I wont. Just keep it as regular as you can.
Good start. But why does everyone hate Ron so much. He is just a kid with an inferiority complex. Give him a break. Its hard to live your life in someones (his brothers and sister) shadow then leave that shadow and find your self in someone elses (harry)