- I like the story and find it interesting. I love the coming back in time with greater abilites and body plot line. I would like to see major revelations and punishment of Dumbledore,Ron,Fudge,and the reorganization of the Ministry. The pairings I would like to see are H/P and Hermione with someone who Harry can get along with,who challenges her, and brings her out of her shell. Thanks for writing and please write more soon.
- My vote for the pairing proposed is Harry/Padma.
Thought I prefer personnally a Harry/harem with Harry and three girls from the other houses (Padma or Luna, Susan Bones, and a slytherin girl like Daphne Greengrass)and perhaps a veela.
But it is your story.
Good Story. Keep the effort going.I like the idea of Sirus animagus form being a wolf.
(#) tumshie1960 2008-07-11You need to remember that harry was brought up as a muggle therefore would know the difference between a dog and a wolf, that and in the books Padfoot is a dog.
As for the ships, run them whatever way you want, and as this is a redo fic you can always redeem Ron by having Harry steer him away from Dumbledore.
You also need to deal with Umbridge and Snape sooner rather than later.
- Here's my vote: Harry/Padma/Ginny/ and Tonks as a little spice. Maybe as a protector for them and she gets a bit too involved... maybe has a blow up fight with Remus or Dumbledore and Harry and his girls console her and she gets involved with them. But, it is your story. I also like Daphne so maybe she can get a little Harry lovin too.
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